Just let me know through IM or mail what you think Sheena.
Have to say I like it more like this than with the item plugged to her. but if you want i can leave it like before, without the balls of course. About make them moving well that can be made with a blur like Photoshop filter, no biggie.
As you can see i start the line art process cleaning and fixing all what the darn scanner destroy and made dirty. This one and the color process are the longest.
Finally ended the line art, scanner sure makes a mess @.@, I also make the small changes you requested. Now the color process will be the longest one, will use the colors of the pic you gave me as reference Shenna, but if you have any other color suggestion you may say so now :)
Now this is the overall colors i will use. Ignore the shadows, they are all gray at the moment, will tune them better later on together with the mid tunes.
There where some power fails that prevent me to finish earlier but think i finish now, let me know if you are happy how it looks ^_^
Looks good so far *smiles* though yes, I prefer no balls
ResponderEliminarIf still possible without ruining anything... there should be a mask on Silver Thunder. covering the region from above the mouth up to the forehead. Nothing elaborate with wings or such, it is just to cover up some of her facial features. The eyes are visible thanks to the 'glasses' covering them not being in place anymore.
of course! you're the boss, this is only the rough sketch, you can ask me to make as many changes as you want. is when i pass to the ink proces when thing get less flexible. so feel free to ask me to make as much changes as you want.
EliminarSo no balls, no running things, and a mask like the little girl in "kick ass" movie?
Dunno if you can make it look as if the ones attached to her are moving, so I leave this up to you.
EliminarAnd the mask ... yes, mostly, it should go a bit more down to cover the nose down to the tip of the nose and from there going left and right. So it would be more like her dad's which always kinda reminds me of Batman's ^^
Mmhm, yes i made some changes, some good and some misunderstoods... take a look please and tell me if you prefer it this way better. ^^U
EliminarYes, I like this more. Initially I wanted her to be stuffed, but I think, this reads better in the Forum-RP than it would look on the picture.
EliminarThe lines do look nicely so far.
Aside of that, I noticed you used chains for her feet. I would prefer something less martial... like ropes or some more sets of fuzzy cuffs if you prefer them. the scene is happening at a hotel, so chains attached to the bed would be a bit odd ;)
ah! right, no chains then *check* Ah, it's a hotel room, didn't knew that till now. okay, will keep working on it, remember the line art and color are the longest most tedious process so be patient now :3
ResponderEliminarI trust you there *smiles* just take the time it needs, I see no use in rushing an artist ;)
EliminarAs you suddenly plopped offline in SL... and I was about to log off as well... here a copy of my last message:
ResponderEliminarlooks very nice what you done there *smiles* for colors... stick to the colors in the notecard for the characters and objects... as few colors as are noted down there *smiles* otherwise, you can do as you wish. I guess the dominating colors will be silver and light blue on the bound "Silver Thunder" and the tools
Looks pretty Well Delana!
ResponderEliminarI am only wondering about the color's of the toys. I would have liked them 'silverish' as well.
Guess I did not stated it clear enough, my bad ^^
Keep up that good work and even if they might be still changeable for you (dunno if or if not) stick with the colors if you prefer them like this. As always, I want you as artist have fun as well.
thanks! glad you like how its going so far, and yes, you made yourself clear enough and i did understand that you say you wanted the toys to be siverish, in fact i made them base gray "silver" from the start, but then i thought that the toys could not be hers, will make more sense if they where left behind by the one who leave her in that situation as a gift, I mean, don't think the heroine will had been caring such toys... right? also in my humble opinion the "colorful" toys will give a better visual texture of rubber/latex than if they where silver who mostly will give the impression of metal. let me know what you think of my idea here. *smiles*
EliminarThe initial but nowhere noted down idea behind the color of the toys was to humiliate her some more, playing with Silver's preference for that color in her costume and equipment. *smiles*
ResponderEliminarBut I want a piece both of us are happy with, I not like to stand behind you with a whip and limit your creativity. Just keep going with the colored toys *winks* I do not believe, that a commissioned picture will turn out exactly the way I had it in my mind. That simply is impossible, in my opinion, unless I learn to draw myself.
Ok... pushed another 8.000$L your way in hopes we can make the full picture vanish at a save place like... my mailbox ;)
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