Layla Ver. 2

For my next commission I'll be drawing Layla again, yes, is not common for me to take two commission in a row,  Layla wanted two version of her avitar with a slight variation, So I suggest will be better to take both slots and draw two different versions instead of making a slight variation on the commission i draw before. Glad Lyla agree, so here it is , the very adult version of her avitar.
For reference i was given a pick of a sparrow drawing, but of course i only take it as an idea and make my own version of that pose. ^.^U

Please tell me what you think layla of this pose, what details should i add or if there's anything you want me to change. Am all ears.
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And here is the Line art!

 I am glad my general idea was preserved, I change some little things taking in consideration Laylas input, so other details will be added in the coloring process... Because this, the color process may take a little longer than anything else so far, so pertinence please ^_^

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And final preview in colors!

I draw the bed in the exact same angle as the pick was given, think that what was Layla ask. i change the colors of some of the pillows to make a contrast, and some i leave it just like the was. Hope all is according to the sloppy mess was told to do *blushes smiling*