Jasmina and Talise getting it on again

Nova 3er commission, with Jasmina and Talise getting it on again as the title say. well haven't think of a title yet, if nova gives me one i will use it ^_^

Was told to put jasmina on her back wile Talise is fucking her throat on a side view wile she plays with her tits, Jasminas cock will be between them.

I wanted to make Jas arms greedily hugging Tals lower body, like trying to engulf as much cock as she can inside her in the heat of passion, the only inconvenient is her face is practically hidden. Also didn't want the pic to be completely side view, because for me like it looks here seems more eye candy and less forced that if it was completely side view.

So, is this okay? any suggestion? if all is okay I'll add more details and will post a more worked sketch next.

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Sketch with more details, in the last commission was asked to make the door nobs nipples, so i add them in this one as well by default, though was not asked too... ^^U

if there anything you wish me to work more or differently let me know, but if all is cool give me the go to start the line art process.

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Line work ready!

Will start the color process next. :)
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Colors done!

took more times for me to find a nice BG, i didn't draw it is a SL BG but took me long enough to find one that fit the position hope you like it!  please let me know if all is good, to send you the hi res picture ASAP.